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A simple embrace,
removes any trace,
of sadness,
from my face,
as you place,
your gentle arms,
with gentle charms,

around me,
suround me,

Don't let go,
'til I know,
you are real,
so I can feel,
might just show,
a little hope,
so I can cope,

with life,
with me,

wounds consealed,
that haven't healed,
burn still bright,
in painful spite,
so I must shield,
the pain I yeild,
from vision's field,
with our lips seeled,

secrets untold,
trust unbroken,

how your touch soothes,
and caringly proves,
you will be near,
when needed here,
steal my fear,
embrace me dear,
give me clarity,
with you're safety,

hug me,
*hugs everyone who comments* :) (Smile)
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JaimeGervais Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
You make me wanna snuggles you and not let go!
rupa Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2002
i normally hate poems that have the rhyming couplets format...but this is just so sweet, i adore it. the sing-songy quality is actually nice in this...sometimes it seems that people are just groping for words that rhyme, regardless of how silly they sound...but this seems much more mature, and your word choice is lovely :) (Smile)
feasenau Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2001
this is very nice...i like...nice flow...great emotion....lovely

in the darkness i dwell...and in it i truly am
woozster Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2001
This is lovely :) (Smile) I had thoughts of writing a hug poem, but after seeing this, haha. It's amazing; I love it *hugs*

.:they call me woozie:.
-or little smiling troll!-
spittlebug Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2001
Just makes you want to reach out and hug someone:D (Big Grin) I do indeed like!

Straight ahead of you, nobody can go very far!
craze16 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2001   Writer
That was really really good! Me likes a lot. Write some more!!


dasquiggyman Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2001
its a great poem it has great flow if you can check out the poems i wrote let me know what you think by emailing me at
Alek Hering
babysista Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2001
*hugs* =D (Big Grin)
i ♥ this!!!!! really! =D (Big Grin)

........................... Bug

Defining creativity
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emoticon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2001
Fantastic Red. What more can I say? A touching poem.

::carry on smiling and the world will smile with you :) (Smile)
bluenine Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2001
Awww. Bro, this is really cute.'s the truth! I don't think anyone'll deny that. I'm glad you wrote this. Today is certainly a day in which we all need something uplifting. Thank you.

(`.,,.`. blueNINE
dor Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2001
yup you've captured what a good hug feels like right there! =) (Smile)

huggles are gooooood & so is this =) (Smile)

jibrille Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2001   Interface Designer
Very cool, well cool is a stupid word to use.. Touching even yeah... I think it is great. I only wish I had thought of this idea.. :) (Smile) Wonderful.

Rehab is for quitters.
sanguru Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2001  Hobbyist Writer
*is hugged* yay

very nice one red. hugs kick ass. Keep up the good work, very expressive and lovely. *hugs you back*

:step-by-step: the dance of life is learned
xenotron Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2001
" is only around to keep you entertained on your journey to the afterlife....." a quote i thought of while reading this. nice poem.

I am XeNoTRoN!
And, the rest of you will be spared. Go back to England, and tell them there that Scotlands daughters and her sons are yours no more.

Tell them Scotland is free!
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