Sta.sh
Just how I feel
by ~cuttheredwirelost, confused, and lonely...
longing to be held.
but how can arms hold,
what slips though my fingers
hurting - mind and body...
weary of daily pain.
how can I go on,
when there is no where to go?
trapped & tainted by freedom...
ideas surge unreleased.
what good are dreams,
with out hope of reality?
desperate... just desperate...
fantasies of faceless lovers,
(what do looks matter anyway?)
who give me pleasure,
(to counter pain)
by understanding,
without explaining,
comforting,
(how I'd love to be understood)
they are a perfect place,
to escape to,
to hide in,
too bad they don't exist.
No escape for me.
No relief for me.
left where I began,
trapped, lost, and hurting...
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"Live without your sunlight.
Love without your heartbeat."
"There's such a fooled heart
Beatin' so fast
In search of new dreams.
A love that will last
Within your heart.
I'll place the moon
Within your heart."
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Places I dig...
• TR Skinnerz rock
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• The next DM is gonna rock
Great work here, even though it's quite sad to read, it's been executed with great skill. I love so many devices in this piece, like "faceless lovers" really stuck into my mind. Great style, great work. Keep writing!
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You are full of potential.
Alot of it is actually about physical pain in my back that never goes away. It does lghten up sometimes, but also gets worse too. Actually, you could say it's really about how that pain affects the mind. All the tactility (which is mentioned often, I just noticed) is to have some help with the pain. Calmingly. The "faceless loves" part is were my mind trys to visualize the tactility, but a thought is not a touch in the end.
THe is my fav though. It ties it all together. Don't know if you noticed it, but it ends with the first word of the first three paragraphs.
Well, there's a synopsis. Been meaning to write one for all my poems. They help shed clarity and ease expression.
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Places I dig...
• TR Skinnerz rock
• Free skinnable software rocks
• The next DM is gonna rock
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yeah, I know wht were u feeling
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The "..." at the end kept this poem in a timeless manner expressing that no matter how things in your life will change afterwards this will always be something that happened deep down inside. Good work.